Tease me

Well, I survived my day of house cleaning horrors. There was a breakdown, and a few tears in the eleventh hour, but I somehow pulled it off and was running out the door at 5:30. Seven and a half hours of cleaning, and they probably spent ten minutes in the place before saying, “Okay, let’s see the next one.”

*grumbles under breath*

Oh well, onto brighter things. Like my Newy teaser. The first bit of the story doesn’t really give away much more than a hint of the premise, so I thought I’d just give you the hook line I have been working on. Well, *gulp* here it is:

Jane Mitchell makes a wish that Brandon Drake will fall in love with her at a single touch, but her life is thrown into chaos when she realizes that not only Brandon, but every guy she touches will love her instantly.



  1. Renee Collins on July 19, 2008 at 2:27 am

    I just reread my post, and I already hate the hook line.

    Oh well. It was my first attempt at writing it down.

    Also, I forgot to make my disclaimer that this book is in no way important or literary. It’s ALL commercial, baby. All fun. All drama. 🙂

  2. Kiersten on July 19, 2008 at 2:47 am

    Oh, the intrigue! I’m already curious.

  3. Natalie on July 19, 2008 at 2:51 am

    Oooo, I love it. That would just be freaking hilarious! I can just imagine.

    So much to play with there.

  4. Renee Collins on July 19, 2008 at 4:10 am

    yeah, a premise like this can go alot of ways. I just hope I’m picking the right ones.

  5. Natalie on July 19, 2008 at 4:27 am

    I still want to see your writing though. I’ve loved your style with the few thing you’ve put up. Send me some! Arg!

    Sorry, I have no patience. I’ll try and restrain myself.

  6. Kiersten on July 19, 2008 at 4:32 am

    Or we could have you restrained.

    Straight jacket, stat!

  7. Natalie on July 19, 2008 at 4:42 am

    Nooo! If I send you Blood Dragon will you call off the crazy police?

    It’s brilliant, I’m telling you. It proves I’m not insane.

    Or maybe it’s the other way around…

  8. Kiersten on July 19, 2008 at 5:17 am

    Yes, I’ll call off the police. Thanks.

    I’m itching to send out the queries (I know, I’m insane. Why not hold onto my dream for a little longer?) and I need distractions.

  9. Kiersten on July 19, 2008 at 5:20 am

    Speaking of James McAvoy (wait, we weren’t? Well, we should be), have you seen Penelope? I loved it.

  10. Natalie on July 19, 2008 at 1:58 pm

    I’ll work hard to give you another distraction. I actually put down 5.5k words yesterday–I’m on a mission to finish now!

  11. Renee Collins on July 19, 2008 at 5:05 pm

    5.5k in one day? Wow! You are insane.

    But, in a good way. 🙂

    And, I remember seeing the trailer for Penelope. It looks very interesting. I’ll have to put it on my Netflix queue.